I don't know what to say. Everything about this game is so beautiful. From how the story flows to pretty designs (the art is so PRETTY and the descriptions are so well detailed). I really love the interactions of the MC with the characters, and Its so well written that I want more of it 😭💗 Thank you for making this! Good luck on the upcoming updates.
GreenGummyFrog, you have similarly put me at a loss for words 😭💕 thank you so much for giving this game a try, and for liking the writing and design I worked hard for! I can't tell you how amazing and profound it is to be seen. I hope you will follow the next updates!! 🫶
Beautiful, beautiful game. The visuals, the writing, the characters — so many aspects of this game come together to create an incredibly immersive experience. The amount of variations available for the player are insane, and makes so much room for you to create complex and vivid MCs. 5 stars, 10/10, and I hope new readers will have as much fun as I am!
Aspen, thank you so so much for your kind words, it means the world to me!! 💕💕 I've rewritten this comment a few times, but I can never quite convey my appreciation in any way that expresses the full breadth of it. Even if I can't hope to show it properly, I've been, and am, extremely grateful for all the support you've given me so far. It's truly astounding. Again, thank you so much :)
Cause I'm not sure the best way to contact the creator about the website, I'll do it here. Salvatore's and Luciel's Heart/Personality section is the exact same, looks like Salvatore's was accidently copied straight up from Luciel's.
Damn.... i want more , when i played the demo i wanted more but now that i have played demo and chapter 1 ... i am addicted .waiting for the next time it updates .
Aaah, I'm glad you liked it so much!! 🫶 I'll be updating Chapter 1 soon with some additional choices, but hopefully I'll be able to write Chapter 2 without delay!
I don't know how to explain it... You did a great job, like the story and how it's portrayed (if it's confusing to read, understand that english is not my first language so.. sorry 😅).
I'm in love with this game, everything about it beautiful💓 the art style, the story, and all the characters can't get enough I replayed it like many times. So excited can't wait for more chapter!
??? I can't believe I didn't see this!!! Thank you so much ursweetalks, I am ecstatic to hear that you've replayed this so many times and haven't gotten sick of it 😭💕🫶 I hope you will continue to read it in the future! I'll be keeping you in mind -- I want to keep it fresh and interesting for you!
Hello Erkang, thank you for reading, even though it is not your first language! I understand as English is also not my first language. I now have an option to change the choices to non-uppercase, but this will be available in the next update!
Here is the option in Settings.
Here's an example of what it will look like in the game.
If the font is too small after it's lowercase, I am also going to fix changing the font size of the choices. Again, it is not in the game just yet, but when I release the update, it will be!
!!! 🥹🫶 thank you so much Ninajuvia! I'm so glad you love the looking mechanic, and--wow, being called dear is always so so reassuring!! Thank you so much for enjoying what I made! 💕
This was so good!! Everything about it was so just so, so good! The designs, the characters, the story - I look forward to the see it develop even more :DD
thank you Siopao!!! I am glad you liked it so much, and I hope to continue to fulfill your expectations going forward 💕 P.S. my mom always said my face was as round as Siopao!
possible spoilers!!!! ohhh my goddddd.. at the 'the order of the Universe be defied' i got GOOOOOSEBUMPS WHATTT i love alll the characters theyre so interesting esp Ciocana, and omg i love my fathers sm here their dynamic is so cute i cant wait for more this is so good i love it<3
Eeeee glad you liked that line! I loved it as well when I was writing it!! <3 I am so glad you love the characters, but the dads have a special place in my heart! ;; Thanks for playing it and loving what I made! :)
i hope you take care of youreself. Mistyrious, stay hydrated and take frequent breaks bc life is simply tiring!! i hope something makes you smile and as happy as u made all of us with this piece of art<3
This is the sweetest comment I've got ♥️ thank you so much for looking out for me as a person, paradidemon, and I hope you take yourself just as you've asked me to do
omg I think waking up at 3 am is the best way to find a game LMAOO I’ve been doing this unconsciously and its always bring me AN AMAZING games to play. I love everything about this like I have no complaints even though im SUPER PICKY about ifs games. HOW 🥹🥹 omg I really look forwards to this. Ily Tysm for making this😔😭💕💕 and take care!!
!!! Thank you Moonmin! 🥹 As someone who's very picky about my IFs, one of my main motivations of writing this is trying to find the perfect IF for myself... if you can't find it, then make it! 💕
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your wonderful thoughts, and have an amazing day!! :)
I would really LOVE to make an IFs games but english is not my strong language yet. HAHAHH I need to practice more but I’ll get there someday. Right now I’m just browsing through and gather my inspiration and this is definitely one of them😭😭💕
And you’re right about that if you can’t find one make one LMAO
But I see many amazing IFs being abandoned or discontinued so that just make me want to make one and and like REALLY finished it.
anyway ty for replying 😭😭hope u have a nice day!! *Heart heart*
Jeez -- absolutely am in love with this story -- and it's just the beginning! The world-building, lore, MC/others (esp. dads!) relationship dynamics -- even the UI/theme -- adore it. :)
Super excited to see where you take it and how the story develops. Especially curious about how MC can evolve throughout the plot, being the deity of eternity or "forever" -- but having nothing in their domain.. but that is something and it can be overwhelming.. It's like silence being very loud. I won't jump into the philosophy of it, lol
Aww, I am so honored that you like everythnig!! ;; I am especially happy with the dynamic with thee dads!
And of course, please feel free to get a bit philosophical about it! I know people often play IFs for the romance, but I would love for other people to dissect the themes and symbols that I want to present. A silence that is loud definitely seems to fit what the deity of eternity is like! If you'd love to have conversation about this, I'd be happy to chat about it!
the world building!!!! the lore!!! i love everything about this!! lucien <3 salvatore <3 ciocana <3 alessi <3 and the dads!! i adore their dynamic with each other and the deity of eternity. one of the best demos ive had the pleasure and privilege of reading in a long time. wonderful prose and amazing cosmetics. such high quality
jujoebee, that is very high praise, thank you so so much!!! 🥺 I am glad you like all the characters, the writing, and the UI!! I hope my love for all of these things came through. Again, thank you again for appreciating these consciously and letting me know 💕
i really love this so far <3! I look forward to seeing more of it! :) just a quick question, is the gender customiseable atp? if so where was the option because i think i missed it
Thank you lavenderjelly! Yes, I somehow neglected to add gender—it never came up, somehow! I will have to add it into Chapter 1 in the future when it becomes relevant, or in the next chapter where I do suspect it will be relevant! Thanks for asking <3
Solaris!! Thank you so much for leaving a comment! I am glad you like the writing and the UI so much, I was worried they'd be too garish or heavy-handed! <3<3
Aww, I'm glad you liked Ciocana!! I always feel awkward trying to portray charming characters, so I'm glad you liked them! I am also glad you were immersed, which I hoped would be easier with the design! Thank you so much for letting me know jiminioli!! 💕💕
Aww, thank you so much, vei!! I am so glad you like the writing and the design, I was so scared for both of those things! Actually, I was also scared for Salvatore, so I am so glad you like them, too!! 💕
I don't really comment on any games but this one was just so amazing! I love it and will be waiting for more updates, the UI was just lovely to look at. ❤️
💕 I'm glad you feel so compelled to let me know that you love it, I promise your words means more to me than you'll know. I am so glad you love Luciel as well, I love them too!! :)
Also, thank your for the permission to use your code! I'm not intended to write Twine IF for anytime soon, but It's very kind of you for the new author out there!
Of course!! I think I didn't make it very clear on the page (so I plan on changing it later), but using copying code as long as it's for gameplay/functional purposes is 100% okay! 🫶 After all, the code has also been the culmination of many people generously helping others with code!
As long as the images and general visuals are different, everything is fair game. I only wrote it because some people want to respect the author's wishes. If you ever write a Twine IF, feel free to look into it / ask me questions on Tumblr! :)
Nahh, it has to be a crime with how talented you are! Seriously, the way this looks and the way this was written, just everything! It’s so, so marvelous 💗💗. And it’s so fun to go back and pick different personalities for the MC. Ohh, now this is going to be my new obsession 🥰. I really love the story too. It’s very interesting and immediately caught my eye. And um, I think that Ciocana has captured my heart, lol. Okay, I’m done raving now. Love this 🫶🏻. Have a good day/night! <33
Aaaa let me know if you can spot the minute differences in each personality! <3 There's variation especially for outgoing/reserved and love mortals/hate mortals. Also for picking different skills--highly recommend!
It is such an honor that you like it so much 💕 and I was so scared that Ciocana wouldn't get any attention because of their relatively short screen time, but maybe that just makes the heart grow fonder?!
Thank you so so much for letting me know you like it, and have a wonderful day!!
Aaaa I'm glad you had such a great experience! The visuals and mechanics are all part of it, so I hope you liked them as much as you liked the writing! Thank you so so much, I hope you'll watch out for more! 💕
awww thank you for replying to lil ol’ me, I saw it just now 🥺 I didn't realise I haven’t mentioned how much I love the visuals! It’s definitely my cup of tea <333
It was a wonderful and beautiful kind of art, a poem of heartfelt pleasure. I'm looking so much forward to engulf myself with more splendid delight, thank you so much 😊
The unknown Mutant, you have such a way with words... I really wanted to treat this IF just as I'd treat writing a traditional novel, so I tried as much as possible not to compromise the writing because it's an IF! For that, I am glad you liked it so much, and I am grateful that you want to see more of it! 💕
How dare you make a game so fantabulous, so stunning, so delightfully splendiferous in both design and writing?!?!? Now I'm stuck thinking about this actual work of art for the rest of my waking days... I can't BELIEVE the audacity you have to get up and make such an excellent game!
M1M1KU, that is incredibly high praise and I hesitate to accept it! 😭 When I look at it, I can't see anything but all the errors I made, so it really means so much to me that you think that it's good! Thank you so so much for letting me know 💕
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I don't know what to say. Everything about this game is so beautiful. From how the story flows to pretty designs (the art is so PRETTY and the descriptions are so well detailed). I really love the interactions of the MC with the characters, and Its so well written that I want more of it 😭💗 Thank you for making this! Good luck on the upcoming updates.
GreenGummyFrog, you have similarly put me at a loss for words 😭💕 thank you so much for giving this game a try, and for liking the writing and design I worked hard for! I can't tell you how amazing and profound it is to be seen. I hope you will follow the next updates!! 🫶
Beautiful, beautiful game. The visuals, the writing, the characters — so many aspects of this game come together to create an incredibly immersive experience. The amount of variations available for the player are insane, and makes so much room for you to create complex and vivid MCs. 5 stars, 10/10, and I hope new readers will have as much fun as I am!
Aspen, thank you so so much for your kind words, it means the world to me!! 💕💕 I've rewritten this comment a few times, but I can never quite convey my appreciation in any way that expresses the full breadth of it. Even if I can't hope to show it properly, I've been, and am, extremely grateful for all the support you've given me so far. It's truly astounding. Again, thank you so much :)
Cause I'm not sure the best way to contact the creator about the website, I'll do it here. Salvatore's and Luciel's Heart/Personality section is the exact same, looks like Salvatore's was accidently copied straight up from Luciel's.
Thanks for letting me know Fizel <3 I'll fix it! 💕
The artwork of the ROs is bloody ✨ gorgeous ✨...I can't take my eyes off it 🫡
🥺💕 I love the portraits so much, too! Thank you so much :)
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Damn.... i want more , when i played the demo i wanted more but now that i have played demo and chapter 1 ... i am addicted .waiting for the next time it updates .
Aaah, I'm glad you liked it so much!! 🫶 I'll be updating Chapter 1 soon with some additional choices, but hopefully I'll be able to write Chapter 2 without delay!
WOHOO let's go .. Btw Great work creator if you couldn't tell it from my comment XD ,I absolutely loved it
😭😭🥹💕💕💕 OMG aaaa thank you so much!!
I don't know how to explain it... You did a great job, like the story and how it's portrayed (if it's confusing to read, understand that english is not my first language so.. sorry 😅).
It's okay if your first language is not English, neither is mine! I understand you perfectly. Thank you so much for trying my game out! 🥺💕
I'm in love with this game, everything about it beautiful💓 the art style, the story, and all the characters can't get enough I replayed it like many times. So excited can't wait for more chapter!
??? I can't believe I didn't see this!!! Thank you so much ursweetalks, I am ecstatic to hear that you've replayed this so many times and haven't gotten sick of it 😭💕🫶 I hope you will continue to read it in the future! I'll be keeping you in mind -- I want to keep it fresh and interesting for you!
我期待着完整版，并感谢您的辛勤工作。但是，对于第一语言不是英语的人来说，选项中的大写很难阅读，以后是否有可能修改。
Hello Erkang, thank you for reading, even though it is not your first language! I understand as English is also not my first language. I now have an option to change the choices to non-uppercase, but this will be available in the next update!
Here is the option in Settings.
Here's an example of what it will look like in the game.
If the font is too small after it's lowercase, I am also going to fix changing the font size of the choices. Again, it is not in the game just yet, but when I release the update, it will be!
Thank you again so much for your interest!!! :)
非常感谢，我相信这将是一部伟大而优雅的电影。
This is too beautiful! Also, when the demo ended I felt a bit unprepared because I was to engrossed. Hehehe 🤩
Aaaah thank you so much Tookie!! :) <3 I am so glad you like the visuals of it!
OMG OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! Everything looks gorgeous too!! omg
AAAA thank you so much themmythe!! 🥹💕 You sound like a beautiful person!
This is fantastic, love the lore and the text info mechanics you have in place. I can’t wait for more, you’re doing fabulous dear.
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!!! 🥹🫶 thank you so much Ninajuvia! I'm so glad you love the looking mechanic, and--wow, being called dear is always so so reassuring!! Thank you so much for enjoying what I made! 💕
That was EXTREMELY fun. Excited for more!
Im so glad you thought it was fun, ninja_of_orthanc!!! Thank you so much for giving it a chance! 🫶💕
This was so good!! Everything about it was so just so, so good! The designs, the characters, the story - I look forward to the see it develop even more :DD
thank you Siopao!!! I am glad you liked it so much, and I hope to continue to fulfill your expectations going forward 💕 P.S. my mom always said my face was as round as Siopao!
5 Michelin stars, 5/5 uber rating, 5 amazon stars and 100000/10 stars of my personal bias
🫶💕 I can't believe I'm getting 5 stars from a certified, professional IF reader, Destroyer of Worlds, Master of Choices, Harbinger of Thirst
possible spoilers!!!! ohhh my goddddd.. at the 'the order of the Universe be defied' i got GOOOOOSEBUMPS WHATTT i love alll the characters theyre so interesting esp Ciocana, and omg i love my fathers sm here their dynamic is so cute i cant wait for more this is so good i love it<3
Eeeee glad you liked that line! I loved it as well when I was writing it!! <3 I am so glad you love the characters, but the dads have a special place in my heart! ;; Thanks for playing it and loving what I made! :)
i hope you take care of youreself. Mistyrious, stay hydrated and take frequent breaks bc life is simply tiring!! i hope something makes you smile and as happy as u made all of us with this piece of art<3
This is the sweetest comment I've got ♥️ thank you so much for looking out for me as a person, paradidemon, and I hope you take yourself just as you've asked me to do
ofcourse<3
This was a wonder to read. It’s been a long time since I’ve felt this immersed. Thank you. :)
What an honor!! I am sure there are many IFs out there, so I am doubly thankful you feel that way! 💕
omg I think waking up at 3 am is the best way to find a game LMAOO I’ve been doing this unconsciously and its always bring me AN AMAZING games to play. I love everything about this like I have no complaints even though im SUPER PICKY about ifs games. HOW 🥹🥹 omg I really look forwards to this. Ily Tysm for making this😔😭💕💕 and take care!!
!!! Thank you Moonmin! 🥹 As someone who's very picky about my IFs, one of my main motivations of writing this is trying to find the perfect IF for myself... if you can't find it, then make it! 💕
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your wonderful thoughts, and have an amazing day!! :)
And you’re right about that if you can’t find one make one LMAO
But I see many amazing IFs being abandoned or discontinued so that just make me want to make one and and like REALLY finished it.
anyway ty for replying 😭😭hope u have a nice day!! *Heart heart*
Ahh!!! If you ever make one, please let me know! I would love to see what you make!! 🫶
Jeez -- absolutely am in love with this story -- and it's just the beginning! The world-building, lore, MC/others (esp. dads!) relationship dynamics -- even the UI/theme -- adore it. :)
Super excited to see where you take it and how the story develops. Especially curious about how MC can evolve throughout the plot, being the deity of eternity or "forever" -- but having nothing in their domain.. but that is something and it can be overwhelming.. It's like silence being very loud. I won't jump into the philosophy of it, lol
Can't wait to see where this goes!
Aww, I am so honored that you like everythnig!! ;; I am especially happy with the dynamic with thee dads!
And of course, please feel free to get a bit philosophical about it! I know people often play IFs for the romance, but I would love for other people to dissect the themes and symbols that I want to present. A silence that is loud definitely seems to fit what the deity of eternity is like! If you'd love to have conversation about this, I'd be happy to chat about it!
Thank you so so much for your interest <3
Great game with an interesting setting and actually characters making want to know more about them.
I can't wait to read more about the story and met the last RO.
People play this game it's a little gem !
Aww, I am glad you feel intrigued to know more about the characters! 🥹 I hope to deliver the next update to you soon! Thank you so much 💕
Give more! I must show mortals that I no care or hate them!
I will try my best! :) 💕
This is so good! I love it so much. The writing is so fantastic and it adds to the atmosphere so well ;0; I can't wait for more.
(Curse me for already wanting to write fic of this lmaooooo)
Shin Ikeru, thank you for liking my writing!! 🥺 And oh my goodness, if you ever do write a fic, please do let me know!! I would be over the moon! 💕
the world building!!!! the lore!!! i love everything about this!! lucien <3 salvatore <3 ciocana <3 alessi <3 and the dads!! i adore their dynamic with each other and the deity of eternity. one of the best demos ive had the pleasure and privilege of reading in a long time. wonderful prose and amazing cosmetics. such high quality
jujoebee, that is very high praise, thank you so so much!!! 🥺 I am glad you like all the characters, the writing, and the UI!! I hope my love for all of these things came through. Again, thank you again for appreciating these consciously and letting me know 💕
i really love this so far <3! I look forward to seeing more of it! :) just a quick question, is the gender customiseable atp? if so where was the option because i think i missed it
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Thank you lavenderjelly! Yes, I somehow neglected to add gender—it never came up, somehow! I will have to add it into Chapter 1 in the future when it becomes relevant, or in the next chapter where I do suspect it will be relevant! Thanks for asking <3
ah ok! Thank you so much <3
the player character's gender presentation isn't able to be set as of yet. only the ROs
The writing is great and the UI is so pretty!
I'm glad you liked so much. cooperative_rat, I worried about them both greatly! :)
It's perfect!!
Thank you so much hiroiko, you're perfect!! ;;
i love how you write! it feels so whimsical and elegant, and the ui of this game is just *chef's kiss*
i hope we get to read more soon!!
Solaris!! Thank you so much for leaving a comment! I am glad you like the writing and the UI so much, I was worried they'd be too garish or heavy-handed! <3<3
i need more of this game this was a awesome read when it actually ended i wished there was more
Aww, thank you Abyssal28! I hope to add more content in the future, so please look out for it!! :)
ciocana a real one!! i like them sm very excited for more!! the atmosphere of this game tho, i was very immersed the whole time. this is incredible !
Aww, I'm glad you liked Ciocana!! I always feel awkward trying to portray charming characters, so I'm glad you liked them! I am also glad you were immersed, which I hoped would be easier with the design! Thank you so much for letting me know jiminioli!! 💕💕
ohhh, i realy like it!!!!
Thank you so much!!! 🥹🙏💕
this is gorgeous!! both design and writing are a delight to witness and experience, i'm looking forward for more <3 (also, salvatore my beloved)
Aww, thank you so much, vei!! I am so glad you like the writing and the design, I was so scared for both of those things! Actually, I was also scared for Salvatore, so I am so glad you like them, too!! 💕
"to0 many fancy words man"
-my ilitterate ass (2023)
Understandable 🥲🥲
I don't really comment on any games but this one was just so amazing! I love it and will be waiting for more updates, the UI was just lovely to look at. ❤️
Also love Luciel... 🫶
💕 I'm glad you feel so compelled to let me know that you love it, I promise your words means more to me than you'll know. I am so glad you love Luciel as well, I love them too!! :)
Wow, this project is so ambitious!
Also, thank your for the permission to use your code! I'm not intended to write Twine IF for anytime soon, but It's very kind of you for the new author out there!
Of course!! I think I didn't make it very clear on the page (so I plan on changing it later), but using copying code as long as it's for gameplay/functional purposes is 100% okay! 🫶 After all, the code has also been the culmination of many people generously helping others with code!
As long as the images and general visuals are different, everything is fair game. I only wrote it because some people want to respect the author's wishes. If you ever write a Twine IF, feel free to look into it / ask me questions on Tumblr! :)
this was super cute! I'll be looking forward to the updates <33
Aww, I'm glad you liked it! And thank you so much for your support going forward!! 🙏💕
This shits amazing
Awww thank you so much!!
Nahh, it has to be a crime with how talented you are! Seriously, the way this looks and the way this was written, just everything! It’s so, so marvelous 💗💗. And it’s so fun to go back and pick different personalities for the MC. Ohh, now this is going to be my new obsession 🥰. I really love the story too. It’s very interesting and immediately caught my eye. And um, I think that Ciocana has captured my heart, lol. Okay, I’m done raving now. Love this 🫶🏻. Have a good day/night! <33
Aaaa let me know if you can spot the minute differences in each personality! <3 There's variation especially for outgoing/reserved and love mortals/hate mortals. Also for picking different skills--highly recommend!
It is such an honor that you like it so much 💕 and I was so scared that Ciocana wouldn't get any attention because of their relatively short screen time, but maybe that just makes the heart grow fonder?!
Thank you so so much for letting me know you like it, and have a wonderful day!!
This was so beautifully written, what an amazing experience! Can’t wait for more :)) <33
Aaaa I'm glad you had such a great experience! The visuals and mechanics are all part of it, so I hope you liked them as much as you liked the writing! Thank you so so much, I hope you'll watch out for more! 💕
awww thank you for replying to lil ol’ me, I saw it just now 🥺 I didn't realise I haven’t mentioned how much I love the visuals! It’s definitely my cup of tea <333
It was a wonderful and beautiful kind of art, a poem of heartfelt pleasure. I'm looking so much forward to engulf myself with more splendid delight, thank you so much 😊
The unknown Mutant, you have such a way with words... I really wanted to treat this IF just as I'd treat writing a traditional novel, so I tried as much as possible not to compromise the writing because it's an IF! For that, I am glad you liked it so much, and I am grateful that you want to see more of it! 💕
hi! i really enjoy this! thank you so much!
logicplague, thanks so much for enjoying it, and thanks for letting me know that you do! It really helps!! <3
How dare you make a game so fantabulous, so stunning, so delightfully splendiferous in both design and writing?!?!? Now I'm stuck thinking about this actual work of art for the rest of my waking days... I can't BELIEVE the audacity you have to get up and make such an excellent game!
M1M1KU, that is incredibly high praise and I hesitate to accept it! 😭 When I look at it, I can't see anything but all the errors I made, so it really means so much to me that you think that it's good! Thank you so so much for letting me know 💕