this is beautiful world-building. would have loved it with music though. it was awfully quiet. I love love love having to use my imagination for most if not all the scenes. The website for your characters are most helpful too! Nice game!
I havent started the first chapter yet, but I can already tell im going to like this game a lot just with the amount of detail im getting in the desc 😭
what a wonderful first chapter, i replayed this now for the 3rd time, simply because i love the entire flow of the story and the world building so much! i really cant wait for more :3
l0rnia, I am so stunned!! I can hardly sift through my own writing, so it's amazing to hear you sat through it three times, that's just! Thank you so much for loving my work and for supporting me, I hope you'll continue to keep an eye out!
I adore the world you've painted for us! Very clever, and the options are very varied and encompassing! Beautiful story-telling! I love each character introduced so far- so excited for whatever direction you take!
Hi w6rm! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts — I'm so delighted that you think that the options are varied and that you loved the storytelling and characters! Those are definitely the main things I'm looking out for. Thank you again and I hope you'll continue to stay updated!
Hi ursqlf! Thanks for letting me know. I think that only happens when you choose to skip transitions, am I correct? I'll investigate it — so sorry for the inconvenience!
Do you mind if you let me know what device you're using? Sometimes my code can be a little messed up depending on the screen size and aspect ratio, so I want to test out what it looks like. Thank you so much for reporting it!
I absolutely love this, I'm truly impressive and blown away! Hopefully you know how wonderful this weave of story ans characters is, if not check yourself and try feel the pride you deserve!
you have inspired me to keep going with my own story (only just recently found that this was an option)
Can't wait for more but also so confused as to who I'll end up with cause right now they all seem just too amazing to not!
Thank you so much, Insomniacbandit!! I am so happy you liked it and extremely flattered. I am not sure if anyone told you before that you give out great compliments — I have to take notes because I'm usually not very good at that myself!
I'm not sure if it's a story that is just personal or private to you, but if you ever choose to publish or share it with the world, please don't forget to let me know! I'd love to see what you've written!! (And to know what you mean when you say you only just found out?)
This game has such a phenomenal style to it! The writing seems to accentuate the characters and use them to drive the plot, and it works because the characters are interesting and vivid.
Calicol, I've never heard anyone say my writing did that -- you had me reading back on my work and trying to understand how you saw it in there! You helped me fall in love with my own writing again, which I confess is very hard at times. Thank you so much for your words, and I hope you'll keep supporting my work ❤️
I started playing and as a writer who doesn't see stuff like this here often (maybe because I don't look,) so my jaw DROPPED when I began reading. Already I cannot wait for what's next and I am so excited.
CrustyOldPete, you should definitely look up more Twine games on the platform! There is a tag for it if you are unaware... there are so many more remarkable writing you have yet to see, I highly encourage you go out for it! Tbr writing is as, if not much better than the one you see in my work!
I am still so honored to hear glowing praise from another writer -- thank you so much for letting me know your thoughts!
It is amazing, immersive, so, so well written. It gives me joy to read such style of writing, like, I mean, it's just...MAN I am going to EAT my pc. I'm gnawing at this story
Your words are so touching!! I figured it would be hard to digest for some; I'm glad you ended up liking it!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write, I can't express my gratitude enough ♥️♥️ it's a open secret that writers LOVE your energy when you write your enthusiasm about their work!!
killermooch, you have no idea how much I feel the same way about my own writing -- wishing I wrote more! Thanks again for playing and for your kind words!
Seems interesting, though I had some trouble parsing the narration near the end. Would've been funny to have the ability to call Ciocana out for being a god when the MC realized it, but I realize there's a number of traits to account for and this is a minor thing. I've been curious how an outside perspective would see our MC, given all the other gods seem to have pieces of their divinity that shine through no matter what.
Hi undeadDreamer, sorry for the confusion towards the end; it's not supposed to be understood very well as it is hinting at something we aren't supposed to know yet, if youre referring to what I think you are!
I believe feedback on how you wish your MC can respond is extremely helpful, and I'm happy to include that option in the game!
I have also received a question about how other people view MC... I might change the character profile to be in the style of viewing yourself the way you might view other characters, and the description varies on a combination of characteristics. This sounds pretty ambitious but exciting, but I am keen on incorporating it!
Thank you so much for your detailed thoughts and the time you spent reading, I really really appreciate it!
Hello Spiritual-Chemistry! It's just new art for now. The art is actually quite old, commissioned back when I was actively working on the IF. I previously wanted to hold onto it until Chapter 2 came out. However, since I went on hiatus and returned, I've decided to release it.
the new art looks beautiful wow!!! the original design will always have a place in my heart for being so charming, meanwhile this new era of visuals is ✨ wow
The original art is so charming, but I wanted to have unique art for even different gender presentations of the ROs, hence new art! They looked quite same-y, as I was scraping some money just to be able to get new commissions at all.
I'm glad you liked then new design, hwhy2!! Thanks for your kind comment!
It has been only four months at this point in time. People do have lives, and things can happen to where they can't write as much. Patience is a virtue.
Awesome game hot bar to say but I hope the MC can become like a supreme evil and destroy she who rules all the way the MC is treated is just awful he was to be the most important, powerful and overpower being instead he is a god of thing and no powers to other gods he is just a assistant I hope he becomes overpower and make them all pay
Hi OminGod, I am happy to incite these feelings in you! I hope you'll express them through your main character as I do want to incorporate that vengeance into their characterization. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Opinions about pronouns and such aside, I personally found the story quite interesting! I liked the fact that I could somewhat shape my character's personality based on what I chose. The artistic section is beautiful. Maybe I would just remove the times when the screen went white (I played this at night). Otherwise I really liked it and I look forward to the next chapters!
Hello erimm, sorry for the late reply and thanks for playing!! In the future, I'll actually add some kind of option to get rid of them, but for now, I hope you'll excuse it! Thank you so much!
So... lemme understand. Having more options, more ways to express your character, is bad because... you personally don't understand some of the options? Cool, pick smth else then? Leave the other stuff for people who do understand and want to use it?
This is the easiest problem in the world to fix my guy, how fragile is your ego that you can't handle even just seeing some funky pronouns and quit so hard you left a salty comment about it.
a lot of people use pronouns as an extension of their identity, while some people care about it less; from my perspective, its mostly just about being able to present yourself in a way that makes you happy and comfortable :)
You could argue that this is misguided though, since pronouns are really one of the least personal and most vague things you could use to describe someone. It seems odd for some people to use that of all things to try to express their whole identity. Unless I'm misunderstanding something ofc.
You're not! The way you're seeing it is perfectly fine, some people care about it more than others and neither are really wrong- for example, i use it/its pronouns because that's just what makes me feel happiest but i don't mind if people call me by something else while done people would care a lot more. My pronouns are more like an aspect of me vs a representation of my whole identity
Pronouns are an essential function of just about any language. A pronoun is basically just a noun referring to a person (bit more complicated but yeah thats the gist). He, she, they, we, it, etc are all pronouns. There may be languages out there with limited pronouns, or who express things in a different way, but most languages I am aware of has them in some form. They are not always gendered however.
In english, several pronouns imply gender. For example "she" implies a female gender to the person being referred to. This creates a problem, as transgender and gender nonconforming individuals are uncomfortable when they aren't seen as the gender they identify as. Thus the concept of changing one's pronouns, and introducing oneself with their pronouns. This is merely a tool by which to ensure that the language we use to identify each other does not accidentally hurt anyone. Its basically the same level of respect as not calling someone a nasty nickname.
This works great, for some people. He/she/they are all very useful pronouns and can be applied to a wide variety of identities and genders, but some people don't really feel like their identity fits within any of those boxes, and they want a new box. Or heck, want to be outside any box. Thus we come to the concept of neo-pronouns. Essentially newly invented pronouns used to describe people who don't feel represented by the "standard set". A lot of people who don't fit in the binary of he/she use "they" instead but that doesn't feel right for everyone. Some people feel more comfortable with a unique singular pronoun instead.
And, finally (apologies for the rather long wall of text, I just wanted to be thorough), we come to eh/ehq. Eh/ehq are examples of neo-pronouns. They're not ones I am familiar with personally, but in essence they express something outside the gender binary. Choosing these pronouns can express character in a lot of ways, especially for an immortal born-from-the-fabric-of-the-universe god like the MC is in Uroboros. It can express an alienation from conventional gender norms, a desire to distance oneself from those norms, a simple sentiment of not caring all that much about gender and preferring to be unique in one's expression, or all of the above, or none of the above.
Eh/ehq, in essence, expresses that the person using them is not male or female, does not wish to present as such, and does not wish to be perceived as such. The reasons for this can be numerous but that is the essence of it.
And bringing back around to the topic of languages. There are languages out there that don't have gendered pronouns, or have less of an emphasis on gendered pronouns. It sounds like you likely speak one of these languages. I imagine it might sound rather silly for english speakers to get all worked up about them lol, but it is just a matter of expressing one's identity. Its also worth noting that not all pronouns refer to people. "This, That, and Those" are all pronouns as well. Again, most languages have pronouns, but only some languages have gendered pronouns and as such using the proper gendered pronouns may be more/less important depending on your language.
You're talking about ego when you're the triggered one. Why am I picking pronouns for characters with nothing but their name to go off? On top of that I don't know what half the words mean. On top of that if they're gods they could all be neutral. I know gender politics are your whole personality but find someone who cares to argue that bullshit
You're the one malding in the comments of an itch.io game because you saw some funny words. And now you're complaining about picking pronouns for the ROs before meeting them? Its very common in IF games to pick the gender (and thus pronouns) of the romance options ahead of time so all the ROs fit your tastes. Literally just complaining about one of the genre conventions now.
If you dont care about gender politics, why are you still here LOL? You're the one who came back to argue.
Regardless of the actual topic here, disregarding an opinion against something simply due to the fact that it's common does not make sense. It's just an appeal to popularity, a logical fallacy. Obviously, there is also a lot of Ad Hominem (another logical fallacy) on both sides here, making this whole argument look silly.
I agree, both sides were illogical and having opinion is your right, if you don't like it, you don't have to, it's your choice, I can respect it.
But I will add this, if you have a issue with a game, this is not how you go about it, tell the creator how they should design the game is like telling a chef how to cook, it's just disrespectful and there is a difference in blatant disregarding their work and providing criticism, it's about respecting them
Even though the other comment do give some ideas and changes ,they are giving criticism and aim to help in further updates, the op just wanted to yell about their issues and not how to fix them
Dude no one is forcing you to do anything if you don't want to pick it then don't your acting as if you can't choose he/him, she/her, or they/them stop whining about more options on games where you can make yourself whatever you want to be.
Hello author. I would like to express my great respect and gratitude to you for creating and introducing us to this wonderful story. To be HONEST, I FELL IN LOVE. THERE ARE JUST NO WORDS. Seriously, I'm thrilled. I have not played chicken games for a long time and I have some problems finding something interesting and exciting for myself. but your story managed to catch on, because I haven't been hooked on anything for a long time. actually, I went to itch io for the first time and then I suddenly came across your game, which I am very glad about. Thank you again very much for your work and for this story. (also, I'm sorry if the text is strange, I'm writing through a translator, since I don't know English. so I was also able to complete the game, sitting cleanly through the translator... it was difficult...)
So good!!! If games didn't require time and effort the fact that this isn't full would be a crime. THEY CHARACTER CREATION THOUGH IS SOMETHING TO DIE FOR TOP TEIR!!! <3
Ahh I'm glad you liked the character creation! It took some time and effort to create it (I was scratching my head to make unique descriptions for each appearance option), but it was all worth it and I'm so glad! Thank you so much, BeeHorn!
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I wonder if this story will get any more updates, I really hope so!
Haven't started to play yet but I know I'll love it already !!
this is beautiful world-building. would have loved it with music though. it was awfully quiet. I love love love having to use my imagination for most if not all the scenes. The website for your characters are most helpful too! Nice game!
this if is soo good holy. Also in love with Ciocana
I havent started the first chapter yet, but I can already tell im going to like this game a lot just with the amount of detail im getting in the desc 😭
what an amazing prologue!! the writing is stupendous, and the story is ever interesting and intriguing !! <33
what a wonderful first chapter, i replayed this now for the 3rd time, simply because i love the entire flow of the story and the world building so much! i really cant wait for more :3
l0rnia, I am so stunned!! I can hardly sift through my own writing, so it's amazing to hear you sat through it three times, that's just! Thank you so much for loving my work and for supporting me, I hope you'll continue to keep an eye out!
Geeeee Love it！！！😍your writing style is AWSOME！
Yuuxiiii thank you so so much for your enthusiasm I love it!!! I am so happy you like my writing!
My reminder to go play it lol >-<
remember to read it
Remember to read it and let me know your thoughts! :) Thank you so much for considering my work!
I adore the world you've painted for us! Very clever, and the options are very varied and encompassing! Beautiful story-telling! I love each character introduced so far- so excited for whatever direction you take!
Thank you!
Hi w6rm! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts — I'm so delighted that you think that the options are varied and that you loved the storytelling and characters! Those are definitely the main things I'm looking out for. Thank you again and I hope you'll continue to stay updated!
am i the only one thats stuck with a black screen in the "Welcome, young one" i cant do anything or get pass it is it my device thats the problem?
Hi ursqlf! Thanks for letting me know. I think that only happens when you choose to skip transitions, am I correct? I'll investigate it — so sorry for the inconvenience!
Do you mind if you let me know what device you're using? Sometimes my code can be a little messed up depending on the screen size and aspect ratio, so I want to test out what it looks like. Thank you so much for reporting it!
this was amazing!!! so so cool!!
I'm really really glad you think so Rae! Thank you so much!!
THIS WAS SO GOOOOOOODDDDDDD
THANK YOU APOLLO!!!! <3
Oh my god it was so good
Thank you so much for the kind words, LsYpx!! :)
I love that the default name if you type your own is morbius
It's an old joke now I'm sure, but I'm keeping it! Thank you so much, Beetlethebat!!
I absolutely love this, I'm truly impressive and blown away! Hopefully you know how wonderful this weave of story ans characters is, if not check yourself and try feel the pride you deserve!
you have inspired me to keep going with my own story (only just recently found that this was an option)
Can't wait for more but also so confused as to who I'll end up with cause right now they all seem just too amazing to not!
Thank you so much, Insomniacbandit!! I am so happy you liked it and extremely flattered. I am not sure if anyone told you before that you give out great compliments — I have to take notes because I'm usually not very good at that myself!
I'm not sure if it's a story that is just personal or private to you, but if you ever choose to publish or share it with the world, please don't forget to let me know! I'd love to see what you've written!! (And to know what you mean when you say you only just found out?)
Much love to you!!
This game has such a phenomenal style to it! The writing seems to accentuate the characters and use them to drive the plot, and it works because the characters are interesting and vivid.
Going to be keeping an eye on this game for sure.
Calicol, I've never heard anyone say my writing did that -- you had me reading back on my work and trying to understand how you saw it in there! You helped me fall in love with my own writing again, which I confess is very hard at times. Thank you so much for your words, and I hope you'll keep supporting my work ❤️
Just giving credit where it's due. Good luck with your writing, and I'll definitely be watching for your stuff!
I started playing and as a writer who doesn't see stuff like this here often (maybe because I don't look,) so my jaw DROPPED when I began reading. Already I cannot wait for what's next and I am so excited.
CrustyOldPete, you should definitely look up more Twine games on the platform! There is a tag for it if you are unaware... there are so many more remarkable writing you have yet to see, I highly encourage you go out for it! Tbr writing is as, if not much better than the one you see in my work!
I am still so honored to hear glowing praise from another writer -- thank you so much for letting me know your thoughts!
Absolute cinema
Absolute, fucking CINEMA
It is amazing, immersive, so, so well written. It gives me joy to read such style of writing, like, I mean, it's just...MAN I am going to EAT my pc. I'm gnawing at this story
Hello Fate_Weave,
Your words are so touching!! I figured it would be hard to digest for some; I'm glad you ended up liking it!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write, I can't express my gratitude enough ♥️♥️ it's a open secret that writers LOVE your energy when you write your enthusiasm about their work!!
it was really fun and immersive, i just wish there was more
killermooch, you have no idea how much I feel the same way about my own writing -- wishing I wrote more! Thanks again for playing and for your kind words!
Seems interesting, though I had some trouble parsing the narration near the end. Would've been funny to have the ability to call Ciocana out for being a god when the MC realized it, but I realize there's a number of traits to account for and this is a minor thing. I've been curious how an outside perspective would see our MC, given all the other gods seem to have pieces of their divinity that shine through no matter what.
Hi undeadDreamer, sorry for the confusion towards the end; it's not supposed to be understood very well as it is hinting at something we aren't supposed to know yet, if youre referring to what I think you are!
I believe feedback on how you wish your MC can respond is extremely helpful, and I'm happy to include that option in the game!
I have also received a question about how other people view MC... I might change the character profile to be in the style of viewing yourself the way you might view other characters, and the description varies on a combination of characteristics. This sounds pretty ambitious but exciting, but I am keen on incorporating it!
Thank you so much for your detailed thoughts and the time you spent reading, I really really appreciate it!
ahhhh! the new art looks so beautiful!!!!
Thank you Lady kai!! I love the art as well!
New art as far as I know.
Hello Spiritual-Chemistry! It's just new art for now. The art is actually quite old, commissioned back when I was actively working on the IF. I previously wanted to hold onto it until Chapter 2 came out. However, since I went on hiatus and returned, I've decided to release it.
Thanks for all your patience!
so glad to hear this game is still alive!!
Wow! The character art is so serene!
Thank you, Clover!!
the new art looks beautiful wow!!! the original design will always have a place in my heart for being so charming, meanwhile this new era of visuals is ✨ wow
The original art is so charming, but I wanted to have unique art for even different gender presentations of the ROs, hence new art! They looked quite same-y, as I was scraping some money just to be able to get new commissions at all.
I'm glad you liked then new design, hwhy2!! Thanks for your kind comment!
Absolutely beautiful. Eagerly waiting for more <3
Thank you so much, (redacted)! (Didn't want to refer to you ever)
absolutely love this! cannot wait for more!
editing because i cannot spell at 2am for the life of me!! 💔
Ahh, thank you Yorbb! I don't want to disappoint you!
You wouldnt disappoint me ^^ . . .unless you would ever rush updates, then id be mad (in a respectful "Grr your health matters more !!ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ" Way)
And the newer RO art is BEAUTIFUL ( holy skibidi Salvatore and Ciocana are hot as hell respectfully)
it is soooo stunning, what a mystic feeling
I'm so glad it conveyed those vibes! Thank you so much, MyKawaiiPanda!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS SO MUCH
THANK YOU LADY KAI!
awesome game though i expected more to play its been a while i dont see a new update...i will wait more for it when the time comes i will be back
Sorry for the delay, Abyssal!
its np really just anxious your game is very good
Is this IF abandoned? If so, how disappointing...
Was last updated august 2024: New SugarCube version
It has been only four months at this point in time. People do have lives, and things can happen to where they can't write as much. Patience is a virtue.
It's not abandoned, but it was on hiatus for a long time. Sorry!
Oh no it's ok. I wasn't following your tumblr at the time so I didn't know then. Take your time and keep going!
Awesome game hot bar to say but I hope the MC can become like a supreme evil and destroy she who rules all the way the MC is treated is just awful he was to be the most important, powerful and overpower being instead he is a god of thing and no powers to other gods he is just a assistant I hope he becomes overpower and make them all pay
Hi OminGod, I am happy to incite these feelings in you! I hope you'll express them through your main character as I do want to incorporate that vengeance into their characterization. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Opinions about pronouns and such aside, I personally found the story quite interesting! I liked the fact that I could somewhat shape my character's personality based on what I chose. The artistic section is beautiful. Maybe I would just remove the times when the screen went white (I played this at night). Otherwise I really liked it and I look forward to the next chapters!
Hello erimm, sorry for the late reply and thanks for playing!! In the future, I'll actually add some kind of option to get rid of them, but for now, I hope you'll excuse it! Thank you so much!
It's pretty cool but damn you for putting those white screens in, they hurt
think fast juggernaut
Super late reply, but I meant for it to flashbang 3 AM readers! Only half-joking :) thanks for playing, Autumnal-Cinders!
Lost me with the nonsense pronouns before the game even started. Not even fucking words but sounds like eh/ehq like wtf am I even picking?
the pronounce that you want, who is forcing you to pick something u don't want?
you pick pronouns for people you know nothing about moron.
Let me get this straight, you are mad at letters, to give flavour, that you can choose, at the very start of the game, in a IF.
Ladies and gentleman and eh/ehq, I think we have found a comment of all time
you seem to be the one that's mad. So clearly you didn't get it right. I said the made up
word pronouns were off putting. Not seeing why you're so bothered by my disinterest
So... lemme understand. Having more options, more ways to express your character, is bad because... you personally don't understand some of the options? Cool, pick smth else then? Leave the other stuff for people who do understand and want to use it?
This is the easiest problem in the world to fix my guy, how fragile is your ego that you can't handle even just seeing some funky pronouns and quit so hard you left a salty comment about it.
a lot of people use pronouns as an extension of their identity, while some people care about it less; from my perspective, its mostly just about being able to present yourself in a way that makes you happy and comfortable :)
You could argue that this is misguided though, since pronouns are really one of the least personal and most vague things you could use to describe someone. It seems odd for some people to use that of all things to try to express their whole identity. Unless I'm misunderstanding something ofc.
You're not! The way you're seeing it is perfectly fine, some people care about it more than others and neither are really wrong- for example, i use it/its pronouns because that's just what makes me feel happiest but i don't mind if people call me by something else while done people would care a lot more. My pronouns are more like an aspect of me vs a representation of my whole identity
(I apologize for the wall of text ;-;)
Pronouns are an essential function of just about any language. A pronoun is basically just a noun referring to a person (bit more complicated but yeah thats the gist). He, she, they, we, it, etc are all pronouns. There may be languages out there with limited pronouns, or who express things in a different way, but most languages I am aware of has them in some form. They are not always gendered however.
In english, several pronouns imply gender. For example "she" implies a female gender to the person being referred to. This creates a problem, as transgender and gender nonconforming individuals are uncomfortable when they aren't seen as the gender they identify as. Thus the concept of changing one's pronouns, and introducing oneself with their pronouns. This is merely a tool by which to ensure that the language we use to identify each other does not accidentally hurt anyone. Its basically the same level of respect as not calling someone a nasty nickname.
This works great, for some people. He/she/they are all very useful pronouns and can be applied to a wide variety of identities and genders, but some people don't really feel like their identity fits within any of those boxes, and they want a new box. Or heck, want to be outside any box. Thus we come to the concept of neo-pronouns. Essentially newly invented pronouns used to describe people who don't feel represented by the "standard set". A lot of people who don't fit in the binary of he/she use "they" instead but that doesn't feel right for everyone. Some people feel more comfortable with a unique singular pronoun instead.
And, finally (apologies for the rather long wall of text, I just wanted to be thorough), we come to eh/ehq. Eh/ehq are examples of neo-pronouns. They're not ones I am familiar with personally, but in essence they express something outside the gender binary. Choosing these pronouns can express character in a lot of ways, especially for an immortal born-from-the-fabric-of-the-universe god like the MC is in Uroboros. It can express an alienation from conventional gender norms, a desire to distance oneself from those norms, a simple sentiment of not caring all that much about gender and preferring to be unique in one's expression, or all of the above, or none of the above.
Eh/ehq, in essence, expresses that the person using them is not male or female, does not wish to present as such, and does not wish to be perceived as such. The reasons for this can be numerous but that is the essence of it.
And bringing back around to the topic of languages. There are languages out there that don't have gendered pronouns, or have less of an emphasis on gendered pronouns. It sounds like you likely speak one of these languages. I imagine it might sound rather silly for english speakers to get all worked up about them lol, but it is just a matter of expressing one's identity. Its also worth noting that not all pronouns refer to people. "This, That, and Those" are all pronouns as well. Again, most languages have pronouns, but only some languages have gendered pronouns and as such using the proper gendered pronouns may be more/less important depending on your language.
You're talking about ego when you're the triggered one. Why am I picking pronouns for characters with nothing but their name to go off? On top of that I don't know what half the words mean. On top of that if they're gods they could all be neutral. I know gender politics are your whole personality but find someone who cares to argue that bullshit
LMAO keep telling yourself that buddy
You're the one malding in the comments of an itch.io game because you saw some funny words. And now you're complaining about picking pronouns for the ROs before meeting them? Its very common in IF games to pick the gender (and thus pronouns) of the romance options ahead of time so all the ROs fit your tastes. Literally just complaining about one of the genre conventions now.
If you dont care about gender politics, why are you still here LOL? You're the one who came back to argue.
I'm not reading all that. I don't have to justify anything to some random who's mad I don't like some game that makes them feel seen.
Regardless of the actual topic here, disregarding an opinion against something simply due to the fact that it's common does not make sense. It's just an appeal to popularity, a logical fallacy. Obviously, there is also a lot of Ad Hominem (another logical fallacy) on both sides here, making this whole argument look silly.
I agree, both sides were illogical and having opinion is your right, if you don't like it, you don't have to, it's your choice, I can respect it.
But I will add this, if you have a issue with a game, this is not how you go about it, tell the creator how they should design the game is like telling a chef how to cook, it's just disrespectful and there is a difference in blatant disregarding their work and providing criticism, it's about respecting them
Even though the other comment do give some ideas and changes ,they are giving criticism and aim to help in further updates, the op just wanted to yell about their issues and not how to fix them
Dude no one is forcing you to do anything if you don't want to pick it then don't your acting as if you can't choose he/him, she/her, or they/them stop whining about more options on games where you can make yourself whatever you want to be.
Why are you so triggered by my disInterest? How does this affect you?
Why are you complaining about something that you don't have to choose? And how does being a baby about it help you?
womp womp anyway i used some fun neopronouns like sol/sols deca/decays nym/nyr how fun!
(no ones forcing you to use pronouns you dont want, inclusivity is good actually)
You s should take your own usernames advice
What you said was unnecessary.
Ok
follow your own username's advice and do the entire world a favor actually 🫶
This was so fun and interesting! Any news on chapt 2? :3
I come back to this every now and then and love it still as much as the first time I read it. I look forward to seeing where the story goes!
Hello author. I would like to express my great respect and gratitude to you for creating and introducing us to this wonderful story. To be HONEST, I FELL IN LOVE. THERE ARE JUST NO WORDS. Seriously, I'm thrilled. I have not played chicken games for a long time and I have some problems finding something interesting and exciting for myself. but your story managed to catch on, because I haven't been hooked on anything for a long time. actually, I went to itch io for the first time and then I suddenly came across your game, which I am very glad about. Thank you again very much for your work and for this story. (also, I'm sorry if the text is strange, I'm writing through a translator, since I don't know English. so I was also able to complete the game, sitting cleanly through the translator... it was difficult...)
Hi! I played the game! Love the concept and world building. I wanna join the discord but they are all expired. Is there a link to the serve?
So good!!! If games didn't require time and effort the fact that this isn't full would be a crime. THEY CHARACTER CREATION THOUGH IS SOMETHING TO DIE FOR TOP TEIR!!! <3
Ahh I'm glad you liked the character creation! It took some time and effort to create it (I was scratching my head to make unique descriptions for each appearance option), but it was all worth it and I'm so glad! Thank you so much, BeeHorn!