Solaris!! Thank you so much for leaving a comment! I am glad you like the writing and the UI so much, I was worried they'd be too garish or heavy-handed! <3<3
Aww, I'm glad you liked Ciocana!! I always feel awkward trying to portray charming characters, so I'm glad you liked them! I am also glad you were immersed, which I hoped would be easier with the design! Thank you so much for letting me know jiminioli!! 💕💕
Aww, thank you so much, vei!! I am so glad you like the writing and the design, I was so scared for both of those things! Actually, I was also scared for Salvatore, so I am so glad you like them, too!! 💕
I don't really comment on any games but this one was just so amazing! I love it and will be waiting for more updates, the UI was just lovely to look at. ❤️
💕 I'm glad you feel so compelled to let me know that you love it, I promise your words means more to me than you'll know. I am so glad you love Luciel as well, I love them too!! :)
Also, thank your for the permission to use your code! I'm not intended to write Twine IF for anytime soon, but It's very kind of you for the new author out there!
Of course!! I think I didn't make it very clear on the page (so I plan on changing it later), but using copying code as long as it's for gameplay/functional purposes is 100% okay! 🫶 After all, the code has also been the culmination of many people generously helping others with code!
As long as the images and general visuals are different, everything is fair game. I only wrote it because some people want to respect the author's wishes. If you ever write a Twine IF, feel free to look into it / ask me questions on Tumblr! :)
Nahh, it has to be a crime with how talented you are! Seriously, the way this looks and the way this was written, just everything! It’s so, so marvelous 💗💗. And it’s so fun to go back and pick different personalities for the MC. Ohh, now this is going to be my new obsession 🥰. I really love the story too. It’s very interesting and immediately caught my eye. And um, I think that Ciocana has captured my heart, lol. Okay, I’m done raving now. Love this 🫶🏻. Have a good day/night! <33
Aaaa let me know if you can spot the minute differences in each personality! <3 There's variation especially for outgoing/reserved and love mortals/hate mortals. Also for picking different skills--highly recommend!
It is such an honor that you like it so much 💕 and I was so scared that Ciocana wouldn't get any attention because of their relatively short screen time, but maybe that just makes the heart grow fonder?!
Thank you so so much for letting me know you like it, and have a wonderful day!!
Aaaa I'm glad you had such a great experience! The visuals and mechanics are all part of it, so I hope you liked them as much as you liked the writing! Thank you so so much, I hope you'll watch out for more! 💕
awww thank you for replying to lil ol’ me, I saw it just now 🥺 I didn't realise I haven’t mentioned how much I love the visuals! It’s definitely my cup of tea <333
It was a wonderful and beautiful kind of art, a poem of heartfelt pleasure. I'm looking so much forward to engulf myself with more splendid delight, thank you so much 😊
The unknown Mutant, you have such a way with words... I really wanted to treat this IF just as I'd treat writing a traditional novel, so I tried as much as possible not to compromise the writing because it's an IF! For that, I am glad you liked it so much, and I am grateful that you want to see more of it! 💕
How dare you make a game so fantabulous, so stunning, so delightfully splendiferous in both design and writing?!?!? Now I'm stuck thinking about this actual work of art for the rest of my waking days... I can't BELIEVE the audacity you have to get up and make such an excellent game!
M1M1KU, that is incredibly high praise and I hesitate to accept it! 😭 When I look at it, I can't see anything but all the errors I made, so it really means so much to me that you think that it's good! Thank you so so much for letting me know 💕
The story is so rich that i may die from pure joy, Actually i can't even choose one of the ROs at all! They're so different and yet so special?? Gonna have a route from every single one whenever any new update come out
Well hmm, Salvatore i think, He is adorable and perhaps has some secrets though he was one of the first to approach MC friendly.
The simple phase that won me was "It took him quite some time before he began to comprehend the idea of space"
Last but not least, The MC's parents are so adorable! They're so different but they complement eachother, both so sweet and adorable, i love them already and of anything happens to them in future I'm surely crying.
Salvatore carries many burdens, and therefore probably some heavy secrets that they can't disclose to anyone, especially as the ruler of the gods' child! So it's interesting you pick up on the fact they may have some secrets 🫣
And aww, I'm glad you like the parents!! They're some of my favorite characters <3 definitely my editor's fave for sure. Hopefully nothing happens to them..............
I hope to get it out soon! ;;; The next update likely won't be Chapter 2, but fleshing out Chapter 1 to include some additional depth and choices for the MC. If you're interested in harsher/bitter/unfriendlier MCs, this update will include some alternative choices for them! (This update probably won't take too long!)
Okay the game in whole is amazing. The design of thr UI and the transitions just made the whole thing more immersive. I enjoyed the depth of interactions we can have with different characters as well. I hope to continue watching this game develop but honestly 10/10 will come back to play again just to enjoy the story and the complexity put into it.
Kanra, I so appreciate your comment!!! Thank you so much for appreciating all that I do, and I'm glad someone likes all the interactions you can have with the characters! Let me know how your next playthrough goes, I recommend taking a completely different personality to see the slight changes in dialogue and options!
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It's perfect!!
Thank you so much hiroiko, you're perfect!! ;;
i love how you write! it feels so whimsical and elegant, and the ui of this game is just *chef's kiss*
i hope we get to read more soon!!
Solaris!! Thank you so much for leaving a comment! I am glad you like the writing and the UI so much, I was worried they'd be too garish or heavy-handed! <3<3
i need more of this game this was a awesome read when it actually ended i wished there was more
Aww, thank you Abyssal28! I hope to add more content in the future, so please look out for it!! :)
ciocana a real one!! i like them sm very excited for more!! the atmosphere of this game tho, i was very immersed the whole time. this is incredible !
Aww, I'm glad you liked Ciocana!! I always feel awkward trying to portray charming characters, so I'm glad you liked them! I am also glad you were immersed, which I hoped would be easier with the design! Thank you so much for letting me know jiminioli!! 💕💕
ohhh, i realy like it!!!!
Thank you so much!!! 🥹🙏💕
this is gorgeous!! both design and writing are a delight to witness and experience, i'm looking forward for more <3 (also, salvatore my beloved)
Aww, thank you so much, vei!! I am so glad you like the writing and the design, I was so scared for both of those things! Actually, I was also scared for Salvatore, so I am so glad you like them, too!! 💕
"to0 many fancy words man"
-my ilitterate ass (2023)
Understandable 🥲🥲
I don't really comment on any games but this one was just so amazing! I love it and will be waiting for more updates, the UI was just lovely to look at. ❤️
Also love Luciel... 🫶
💕 I'm glad you feel so compelled to let me know that you love it, I promise your words means more to me than you'll know. I am so glad you love Luciel as well, I love them too!! :)
Wow, this project is so ambitious!
Also, thank your for the permission to use your code! I'm not intended to write Twine IF for anytime soon, but It's very kind of you for the new author out there!
Of course!! I think I didn't make it very clear on the page (so I plan on changing it later), but using copying code as long as it's for gameplay/functional purposes is 100% okay! 🫶 After all, the code has also been the culmination of many people generously helping others with code!
As long as the images and general visuals are different, everything is fair game. I only wrote it because some people want to respect the author's wishes. If you ever write a Twine IF, feel free to look into it / ask me questions on Tumblr! :)
this was super cute! I'll be looking forward to the updates <33
Aww, I'm glad you liked it! And thank you so much for your support going forward!! 🙏💕
This shits amazing
Awww thank you so much!!
Nahh, it has to be a crime with how talented you are! Seriously, the way this looks and the way this was written, just everything! It’s so, so marvelous 💗💗. And it’s so fun to go back and pick different personalities for the MC. Ohh, now this is going to be my new obsession 🥰. I really love the story too. It’s very interesting and immediately caught my eye. And um, I think that Ciocana has captured my heart, lol. Okay, I’m done raving now. Love this 🫶🏻. Have a good day/night! <33
Aaaa let me know if you can spot the minute differences in each personality! <3 There's variation especially for outgoing/reserved and love mortals/hate mortals. Also for picking different skills--highly recommend!
It is such an honor that you like it so much 💕 and I was so scared that Ciocana wouldn't get any attention because of their relatively short screen time, but maybe that just makes the heart grow fonder?!
Thank you so so much for letting me know you like it, and have a wonderful day!!
This was so beautifully written, what an amazing experience! Can’t wait for more :)) <33
Aaaa I'm glad you had such a great experience! The visuals and mechanics are all part of it, so I hope you liked them as much as you liked the writing! Thank you so so much, I hope you'll watch out for more! 💕
awww thank you for replying to lil ol’ me, I saw it just now 🥺 I didn't realise I haven’t mentioned how much I love the visuals! It’s definitely my cup of tea <333
It was a wonderful and beautiful kind of art, a poem of heartfelt pleasure. I'm looking so much forward to engulf myself with more splendid delight, thank you so much 😊
The unknown Mutant, you have such a way with words... I really wanted to treat this IF just as I'd treat writing a traditional novel, so I tried as much as possible not to compromise the writing because it's an IF! For that, I am glad you liked it so much, and I am grateful that you want to see more of it! 💕
hi! i really enjoy this! thank you so much!
logicplague, thanks so much for enjoying it, and thanks for letting me know that you do! It really helps!! <3
How dare you make a game so fantabulous, so stunning, so delightfully splendiferous in both design and writing?!?!? Now I'm stuck thinking about this actual work of art for the rest of my waking days... I can't BELIEVE the audacity you have to get up and make such an excellent game!
M1M1KU, that is incredibly high praise and I hesitate to accept it! 😭 When I look at it, I can't see anything but all the errors I made, so it really means so much to me that you think that it's good! Thank you so so much for letting me know 💕
I love it so much.
The story is so rich that i may die from pure joy, Actually i can't even choose one of the ROs at all! They're so different and yet so special?? Gonna have a route from every single one whenever any new update come out
nigthwingwithknife, thank you so much!! :) I'm glad you like the story and all the ROs--any thoughts on who to go with first? 💕
ooh you replied! This made my night even sweeter
Well hmm, Salvatore i think, He is adorable and perhaps has some secrets though he was one of the first to approach MC friendly.
The simple phase that won me was "It took him quite some time before he began to comprehend the idea of space"
Last but not least, The MC's parents are so adorable! They're so different but they complement eachother, both so sweet and adorable, i love them already and of anything happens to them in future I'm surely crying.
Salvatore carries many burdens, and therefore probably some heavy secrets that they can't disclose to anyone, especially as the ruler of the gods' child! So it's interesting you pick up on the fact they may have some secrets 🫣
And aww, I'm glad you like the parents!! They're some of my favorite characters <3 definitely my editor's fave for sure. Hopefully nothing happens to them..............
aaaa i need more
I hope to get it out soon! ;;; The next update likely won't be Chapter 2, but fleshing out Chapter 1 to include some additional depth and choices for the MC. If you're interested in harsher/bitter/unfriendlier MCs, this update will include some alternative choices for them! (This update probably won't take too long!)
Bloody hell it's finally here ✨ 😭
So sorry to keep you waiting!!! 😭🙏💕
NO! Thank you for this masterpiece ❤️✨😭
Okay the game in whole is amazing. The design of thr UI and the transitions just made the whole thing more immersive. I enjoyed the depth of interactions we can have with different characters as well. I hope to continue watching this game develop but honestly 10/10 will come back to play again just to enjoy the story and the complexity put into it.
Kanra, I so appreciate your comment!!! Thank you so much for appreciating all that I do, and I'm glad someone likes all the interactions you can have with the characters! Let me know how your next playthrough goes, I recommend taking a completely different personality to see the slight changes in dialogue and options!